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Organization Idea Pitch: Allie

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  • Voice/Body Language
  • Ethos/Professionalism
  • The “Hook”
  • Information/Level of Detail
  • “Reality” of Project
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  1. September 21, 2011 at 8:50 PM

    I should’ve probably looked more put together, knock to the professionalism grade. I also should’ve given more information and details about my company instead of talking about the success of other competitors as much. I think the project definitely could have been a success for the semester though.

  2. September 28, 2011 at 10:19 PM

    Voice/Body Language- good, good amount of eye contact with audience, could have been a little less natural and less focused on what was on the note cards.
    Ethos/Professionalism- idea and over all pitch showed high ethos, but appearance lacked professionalism.
    The “Hook”- good, showed popularity of ‘green’ companies. could have had a more specific hook for company.
    Information/Level of Detail-good level of detail of the market, not so much individual company. didn’t touch on what positions would be needed or what company’s goals were
    “Reality” of Project- I think the product definitely could’ve been a success, especially during the semester.

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