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Organization Idea Pitch: Michael

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  • Voice/Body Language
  • Ethos/Professionalism
  • The “Hook”
  • Information/Level of Detail
  • “Reality” of Project
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  1. September 21, 2011 at 2:30 AM

    Very good presentation didn’t rush and spoke very clear. Good idea but need to figure out a source of income. Businesses will give discount but not free

  2. September 21, 2011 at 9:17 PM

    I believe that I could of done a better job with eye contact and I was fidgety throughout the presentation. I also agree that the idea is there but a clear business idea still needs to be laid out.

  3. September 21, 2011 at 9:31 PM

    The presentation was good, being easy to listen to and follow. Details were good and the tone of the presentation was professional yet fun being a tailgating event.

    • September 22, 2011 at 7:23 PM

      Your voice and body language were both good and the presentation was easy to listen to and and follow what you were saying. This also made the reality of the project seem possible because your voice made it appear easy to set up a tailgate. The only concern I have for it would be the basketball team is a spring sport so I think there will not be many opportunities this semester to have the tailgate. Being a Bills fan your entire life makes you passionate for the team and makes people under you more comfortable knowing that their boss will do what it takes. The ideas for the tailgate are good but the organization seemed a little off and not done which is to be expected at this point. The hook was good because basketball is our main sport with their brand new facility and and a tailgate can show that off a bit to people not familiar with the building.

  4. September 28, 2011 at 2:28 AM

    Your voice was clear and loud enough but your body language was off. You were rocking and your hands seemed awkward. Your pitch was done professional though you told us your background and what you need to do. This also made it seem possible because you weren’t asking for absurd things. Also the level of detail was very good with out flooding us with information you told us how it would work and made it seem very do able. To wrap it up I wanted to talk about your hook. Your hook was well done but you seemed to rush it. If you were to add a pause to let them think for a second. But over all a very good pitch and presentation

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