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Organization Idea Pitch: Brian

Reminder: When commenting address these elements of the pitch:

  • Voice/Body Language
  • Ethos/Professionalism
  • The “Hook”
  • Information/Level of Detail
  • “Reality” of Project
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  1. September 20, 2011 at 7:53 PM

    clear delivery, good speech. however the business is not that attractive, but really easy to operate and is a good business.

  2. September 21, 2011 at 2:28 AM

    Pauses and repeated myself I should have practice in front of a mirror to get used to talking to some one.

  3. September 22, 2011 at 3:27 AM

    As far as your voice and body language I think you did a good job staying comfortable and speaking up. Professionalism looked good as well. It was smart to mention that you have worked with bikes before so we know you have that experience. Your hook could have been more original, but you did a good job going into the details of the business explaining the different kinds of services you would provide to students. And finally the reality of the project was definitely there, I think you could really put this together and it would be beneficial to SLU students as well.

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